08 May 2011

6SS: We Meet Again

Welcome to another week of Six Sentence Sunday. Here we have Jess running into John for the first time since she saw John last. Jess goes to meet her sister at the local ice creamery, and while said sister is inside, John conveniently shows up...

Also, it occurs to me that I'm yet to actually show you what happened during that last meeting. Maybe I'll be nice and show you next week O:)


Photo by National Geographic on Super Stock.


“Lovely day, isn’t it?” John said and came to join her.
Jess scooted over to make room for him. “Sure,” she said, pretending that he hadn’t just laughed at her for kicking her legs like a five-year-old. “Maybe.” Jess wrinkled her nose. What had made her say that?


As always, check out the other sixes here :)

10 comments:

Marie Dees said...

Oh, is she short like me? I'm always swinging my legs like a kid because they don't reach the floor.

Rebecca Royce said...

Great dialogue!!

Carolyn Rosewood said...

What an intriguing exchange!

Gayle said...

Interesting six. :)

Liana Brooks said...

I'm going to sit Jess down and explain how to talk to hot boys. There's a whole song for here, POPULAR in the musical WICKED.

"We'll make you Pop-U-Lar!"

*expects there is more of the scene in her in-box if she looks - yes?*

Lindsay said...

Love the leg swinging. Add a new demension to the character. Not short but youthful

Taryn Kincaid said...

Ice cream makes me bounce too!

Sandy Nachlinger said...

What a fun bit of dialogue! Very realistic since people don't always say what they mean to say.

J.A. Beard said...

Poor girl! Just can't quite keep herself smooth during the convo. Very realistic.

Jayel Kaye said...

fun dialogue. I loved the leg swinging

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